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...and so it begins. I haven't been working on this as much as I should, I confess, but hopefully I can start picking up the pace (Shadi, you have no choice. AWA is a little over ten weeks away).

Anyway. His face; it bothers me. It looked so good in the sketch; why isn't it working here, I ask myself. Hwoarang seems to approve, though. :giggle:

Part of me wonders if I'm just better off fixing the pencil lineart and just going from that. But then, I don't think I can improve my CGing that way...

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:iconwinged-dragon-ra:
-giggles- it's Jin >w<

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IT BEGINS. Or continues, depending on how you see it. I'm gonna make this look good. Or try to. FOR THE JIN FANS I never thought I would say that EVER

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I love, love, LOVE those red eyes. Also, that subtly manic look in his expression.

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:iconlordicefox:
Well this is a great piece and I certainly love the red eyes.

Now for what I see wrong. Its not so much the eyes are lop-sided its that they seem to distant apart. The left eye (his left) seems to look like it is straying from his face.:giggle:

Also I am not sure why but it looks like his head is slightly too small or his body has too massive. It may be just me. I always love how you put depth and form to the art. You actually make the body look 3D.

Well not sure this will help but I hope it does. I am impress yet again with your work.

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XD lol wow. WELL I LIKE JIN. ... but I really like Hworoang too... or however you spell his name

THAT IS MY TEKKEN TEAM, I AM UNBEATABLE WITH THOSE TWO HAHAHAHAHA

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Thank you! I figured since there was a lot of red to be used in the piece, plus the whole Devil factor, it would be rather fitting. Glad you like it. That, and the expression, since you were one of the people that suggested I change it up--seems like I'm going in the right direction in that case. :)

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:iconezrashadowstorm:
I agree with LordIceFox on the way his eyes are shaped. Also, for it being the angle it is, the left eye (the one you're pointing out) seems a bit too flat, like it doesn't follow the natural curve of the skull or the way an eye is naturally spherical. Then again, it could just be that you haven't yet shaded enough for the depth in the eye and it's throwing us all off... just a thought. ^_^ \/m

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:iconleaf-nin:
i like the red eyes, but there's something incredibly creepy about his face. maybe it's the half-smirk?

and i don't think it's the left eye that's droopy. the right one's somewhat crooked.
:iconkung-fu-mushroom:
I think it's because both eyes are different shapes. His right eye is a pretty standard almond shape and is pointing downwards, while the left is more anime-esque shaped and is pointing up.

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